a medium, a comma
a verbal density
resulting
in lineal peace
commanding prose
purely in two ways
a brain, its rape
in most, a copy
of who i use to be
of skin, and gaze
received, purely
without rage
with deeper cause
i, begin, to, live, again
Love it!!! A big kiss
xo – thank you!
Lovely economy of phrase here, nice use of commas throughout. Inventive and evocative. Thanks.
Oh Paul, thank you so much.
there are times when i feel compelled to respond to your verses. overwhelmingly. a need to say … something. yet the voice that speaks your words fills this space so completely that all i can do is listen. and feel. and remain still.
Having, and being real, is all I can be…
You listening grows inside the most lit of places.
-m
Oh dash it all. What George said.
M
xo
Yes, please… do live.
Thank you !
You created a dreamy visual, when you brought up ” with deeper cause,” so eloquently you have mothered that image with your stunning voice. How can you write such beautiful images, Mari, you are an amazing soul.
Every word Pawan; uttered, whispered in the lowest of tones.
You brush off these screens, see deeper, where there is too much, of me, the unceasing words.
Peace and joy to the brightest of souls, you . .