describe a girl
a mirror bathing itself
a lover mounted
on a shelf
writing the word
r.a.p.e
as, twelve tales
hurry, and erase
every decimal
immaculately
describe a girl
a mirror bathing itself
a lover mounted
on a shelf
writing the word
r.a.p.e
as, twelve tales
hurry, and erase
every decimal
immaculately
Gosh! Short and simple expressions, Mari. Well done! \m/
Please do have a look at this post when you will get free time.
http://myindividualinsights.wordpress.com/2013/02/21/official-release-of-obtrusive-hopes/
Rahul
Thank you for this!
This poem tugs hard and heart and begs all to ponder carefully.
Eric
Thank you Eric.
Powerful!
; )
Oh, Mari.
hard most of the time.
Beautiful and heartbreaking. I love the line “a mirror bathing itself”–enigmatic, vivid.
Honored to be read by you, and others. I thank you, ever so.
Oh my!
: )
Really, kind of a terrifying poem. Very powerful. K.
Thank you!
As a lover mounted on a shelf – stuffed and forgotten – r.a.p.e. are only shapes on the page of the far wall – disfigured shadows…
yes.
Another disturbing, yet thought provoking extract.
Thank you!
So much power and feeling here…
Undoubtedly – and free…
Thank you.