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Chucks Bar

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Scattered me

I long to be something

Stronger 

Than a woman 

Who once loved you 

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16 responses to “Chucks Bar”

  1. beeseeker Avatar
    beeseeker

    Is it possible?

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  2. andysmerdon Avatar
    andysmerdon

    You are a poet 🙂

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  3. helmontpetit Avatar
    helmontpetit

    I have known this. Beautifully put.

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  4. mvitrano Avatar
    mvitrano

    Stop living in the past, be present and aware of all the good in your life now.

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  5. The life and Opinions of Elliebloo Avatar
    The life and Opinions of Elliebloo

    strong and clear…really liked the emotion it evokes

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  6. stonehooper Avatar
    stonehooper

    So evocative!! I find myself mesmerized by the simplicity and depth all at once. Keep writing. Love it.

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  7. wafflemethis Avatar
    wafflemethis

    Isn’t that a good thing to be.

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  8. Chrissy Avatar
    Chrissy

    love the simplicity in this

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  9. writingforselfdiscovery Avatar
    writingforselfdiscovery

    Been there. But the fact that you’ve written it proves that you are stronger than that woman.

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  10. cote8050 Avatar
    cote8050

    It takes a strong woman to love… as my last poem said, love is not for the faint of heart! Nice writing. Michelle

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  11. J Lapis Avatar
    J Lapis

    Powerful writing.

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  12. Carisa Adrienne Avatar
    Carisa Adrienne

    ❤️

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  13. shalini Avatar
    shalini

    Feel like this too!

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  14. sirensorceress Avatar
    sirensorceress

    This one made my heart hurt

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  15. Bill Friday Avatar
    Bill Friday

    ❤️

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  16. joe_mandiya Avatar
    joe_mandiya

    Following your beautiful blog and I will be glad to see you follow mine too

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