Outsider

Took my first steps

On this corridor

Unleveled earthiness

Saw myself reflected

In a rush of energy

Becoming self aware

That I had just met my soul

It kissed my forehead

From birth to forever

With only God in between

Punctually swallowing

All of my blues

With such artistry

That when I glance at my children

I do it

With eyes closed

Because I too

Saw my life

Pointing back at me

Ciudad Habana, Cuba

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3 responses to “Outsider”

  1. Bill Friday Avatar

    It’s the poems we write, about our best beloveds, that weigh the most. That ground us. This did that, to me.

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    1. Mari Sánchez Cayuso Avatar

      I felt vacuumed when done. Almost rushed, if that makes any sense. If it evoked something in you, I can just smile. Thank you 😊

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      1. Bill Friday Avatar

        Everything you write evokes something in me.

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