To me . .

the world spins 

ready to loose, and peel

comparable to a star

proudly moving through water

there is no equal

more beautiful 

than her roseness at my feet

i admit here, i seek shelter 

a shelter of brightness 

when most of my most, is dark

cross high and unstrange 

 

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15 responses to “To me . .”

  1. Steve Manolis Avatar
    Steve Manolis

    Beautiful poem

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  2. Iris@poetsmith Avatar

    Beautiful, moving words. Take care. Regards, Iris

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  3. braon Avatar

    like your poems

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  4. gigoid Avatar

    🙂 Light after/amidst the dark is peace; lovely feeling…

    Amazing, as always, hermanita. Thanks.

    gigoid

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  5. AnElephantCant Avatar

    Cool poem.
    Great photograph, too.

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  6. N Filbert Avatar

    love what i see of that tattoo!

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  7. Carisa Adrienne Avatar

    ((((Hugs))))) ❤️

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    1. Mari Avatar

      Thank you love, truly ..

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      1. Carisa Adrienne Avatar

        Mari, thank you sharing your beautiful writings with all… But most of all thank you for sharing your most precious gifts you’ve ever held. I now hold them too❤️

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        1. Mari Avatar

          Thank you Carisa. I try so very hard. I find peace and release.

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          1. Carisa Adrienne Avatar

            I am trying to do that. My head and heart don’t seem to agree on that ❤️

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